Matt Bellamy

Two p's in appreciation. I really like this. It's short, simple, but at the same time very descriptive. Also it's not too short - it doesn't leave us hanging. It ...

Right, I'll just get the technical bits out of the way - you put a couple of capital letters in there in random places, and this line - "won't change ...

I like the similes you used in this poem. However, I think you could extend these a little. For example, in the first line you compare prisoners to rainbows, and ...

I like this. The title is a great concept, and I think you could incorporate that animal, chameleon imagery into the poem, because it's a good comparison. Not sure about ...

Ooh, what an interesting format. Sounds a little difficult, I like how it gets all wrapped up in the last stanza, though. Knowing that it's supposed to follow a set ...

The style of this poem isn't something I would normally read, but I like it, and you did it well. It reminded me of the Ancient Mariner in it's style ...

I hate seeing so many topics unanswered, so I'm bringing this up to flex my critting muscles. :) Below I have just corrected some things and put some suggestions. Night ...

I like this. Just a couple of things: "they can’t not harm she says" - Shouldn't this be "they cannot harm she says"? Because it's a double negative, and doesn't ...

I love the first stanza of this. The imagery is great, and I love the tone of the poem. One thing I would say is that "Away from me, go," ...

This sounds really great in my head. Particularly the last stanza - great imagery, sounds wonderful. The last line, as well. Sorry this comment isn't overly helpful :P But good ...

This is by no means an original idea, it is rather cliché, and you should experiment with your writing style to make it your own. That's not to say that ...

This has a lot of potential. Let's go through it. he fell down she offered a hand he hit the ground she helped him stand I liked this stanza - ...

I find the concept somewhat cliché and overdone. The ending came suddenly and unexpectedly, and disappointed me a little because this kind of poem has been done so many times. ...

April? I'm beginning to think people are afraid of critiquing long poems ;) As am I *blush* You have a very distinct style, which I like. Your imagery is good ...

This was well written. However, I am guessing the reason why it has yet to be critiqued is that it is rather long, and a little difficult to "get". I ...